tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177797611659983135.post1793504072882783386..comments2023-10-16T09:50:40.937-04:00Comments on Barbara V Evers: Hook Line or Sinker?Barbara V. Evershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07350675979426950166noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177797611659983135.post-69406954226987314892010-05-18T10:09:43.193-04:002010-05-18T10:09:43.193-04:00Good for you Carole! Sounds like an interesting w...Good for you Carole! Sounds like an interesting workshop.Barbara V. Evershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350675979426950166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177797611659983135.post-38823841306745054472010-05-17T09:50:17.595-04:002010-05-17T09:50:17.595-04:00Coincidence: I'm presenting (yes, again) at m...Coincidence: I'm presenting (yes, again) at my CRW group in Charlotte next June 5th. The title of the workshop: The First Paragraph. We'll review NYT best sellers openings, and we'll critique our members' as well. Should be fun!Carole St-Laurenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10941223844222435796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177797611659983135.post-23032199785945085132010-05-12T16:09:55.467-04:002010-05-12T16:09:55.467-04:00I've been going over my opening for several da...I've been going over my opening for several days, analyzing every word. Does it do what it's supposed to? Is it strong enough? Is it interesting? Does it hook the reader? <br /><br />Some days I want to put the re-writing aside and jump into something new. New is so easy--you just put the pen to paper, or fingers to keyboard, and write. Let it pour out in an undisciplined, heady rush. <brValerie Norrishttp://valerienorris.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com